The new semester has begun. Japanese new semesters start in April and September. Today, I’m going to write about my summer vacation. I went to some places. For example Kyoto, Osaka, Tokyo Disney Sea and camping. Especially memorable is the Kyoto and Osaka trip. I traveled for four days with my friend. We experienced fantastic things. We wore yukata in Kyoto. They are beautiful clothes. We went to USJ. It’s Halloween season, so there were zombies. I was so scared. And more, we had such a special time. I want to go again. I enjoyed summer! And, I think I will go abroad during the winter vacation. I can’t wait for my next vacation!

The new semester has begun. In Japan, the first semester starts in April and the second in September. Today, I’m going to write about my summer vacation. I went to some places to visit. For example Kyoto, Osaka, Tokyo Disney Sea and camping. Especially memorable this trip were Kyoto and Osaka. I traveled for four days with my friend. We experienced fantastic things. We wore yukata in Kyoto. Yukata are so beautiful. We went to USJ and because it was Halloween season, so there were zombies. I was so scared. We had a special time. I want to go again. I enjoyed summer! And, I think I will go abroad in winter vacation. I can’t wait for the next vacation! Good job! You wrote a lot. Just remember when you write about the past it's best to use the past tense consistently.