I corrected your message as minimally as possible. But if you'd like, we can also rephrase the third sentence, this way "Mahilig akong mag-aral ng mga lenggwahe" ("mahilig" denotes interests or hobbies). Also, just a tip, we always (in most situations, at least) use the particle "na" ("now") when we say our age ("I'm 27 years old NOW"). That's all. Other than that, you did good! Keep it up! :)

Good day! Hello Jaycee! I indicated some corrections on your post. You may also rephrase some sentences into a simpler and more natural style. I can guide you further with that in my class if you would like to book a lesson with me. Other than that, I see that you're already doing good. Keep it up! I would just like to suggest for you to take up more lessons on conversational practice to be more confident and to be able to construct better sentence structures. By the way, my name is Angel. I'm a cheerful and friendly tutor from the Philippines. I teach Filipino/Tagalog language which is my native language as I am a pure Filipina. I can surely help you improve your communication skills in Filipino/Tagalog language in the fastest and easiest way through my step-by-step teaching strategy and conversational practice lessons for all levels and ages. You can check my profile and fill in the contact form then book a trial lesson with me so we can discuss further about your learning goals and to actually achieve it in our classes. If you have any questions, feel free to send me a message and I will reply to you as soon as possible. I'm looking forward to your response and I hope to see you soon in my class. :)

Kumusta , Ako c Jaycee Ang hilig ko ay mgaral Ng mga linggwahe ,. Nagaral ako Ng Tagalog noong ako dalawangpu't pito pero mag dalawangpu't walo na ako sa pebrero

Kumusta?ako si Jaycee hilig ko and mag aral ng mga lingwahe .Nag aaral ako ngayon ng Tagalog.Dalawamput pitong taon na ako ngunit mag dadalawamput walo ako sa Pebrero.