最后一句: 所以我不能告诉你关于它

我想这是一部好的电影

我有一本

《我的爱好》- My hobby. 我的爱好是看书(和*)看电影。我看过(很多的书*)(，)(其中，*)我(最喜欢的*)的书(是)《小王子》(，)(我认为)这个故事太好了(！)我看过(很多电影*)(，)我不久以前看(了*)《识夜描银》(，)我想这是好的电影。我也喜欢上网(，)我经常在网(上*)读短篇小说(，)(我认为这些活动都很有趣)！我不喜欢运动，(所以我不能告诉你关于运动的事情/所以我不能和你分享关于运动的事情**) *Remarks: Someone have already explained what is the difference between和and 或 in the comments. He or she is correct. 我看过的书很多is not wrong, but sounds a bit weird. It’s just like you’re saying: ”The book I have read was many.” 其中means among something. 其中here mean among them(the books that you have read) Favourite=最喜欢的 In Chinese, we usually put the adjectives in front of the word. 了it’s just like the past tense “-ed” but in Chinese version, you have to add it due to that it is a past event. It’s kinda weird if you don’t add上, idk how to explain but I can tell you that we always use网and上 together, meaning “on the internet” 自陈❌ there’s no such word 自称✔️ 自称means “ I call myself” E.g. 他自称是天才，却连这种那么简单的事情也处理不来。 He calls himself as a genius, but he don’t even know how to tackle this easy problem. That’s why you can’t use自称 “Tell” in Chinese is 告诉, you can also use分享(share) in this situation. And I think it is more suitable to use 分享 Btw interesting story, I appreciate it :D

This one will reads better. 我的爱好是看书或看电影。我读很多书，其中（Among them），我最喜欢的一本是《小王子》。这故事很不错。我看很多电影，最近我刚刚看了《……》，我想这电影不错。我也喜欢上网冲浪，我也喜欢在网上看小说，它们(the novel)也很好，我不喜欢运动，所以我没法和你讨论它。