Swetlana
Hi english native speakers! could you check my speech for my last working day in the company. Thank you for the goods words . I did all my best to share all knowledge with the new team. I am sure that they are ready to continue working without my support. And also wanted to say that for me it was very valuable experience to work in big American company take participation in the company's processes, be part of big 'Company-X' team. Thank you for your supervision and good relationship.
2024年5月19日 16:29
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Here are my corrections, Swetlana: Thank you for the kind words. I've done my best to share my knowledge with the new team, and I feel confident that they are prepared to continue working without my support. I also wanted to say that it has been an invaluable experience to work in a large American company, participating in company processes, and to be a member of the fantastic "Company-X" team. I am grateful for your professionalism, guidance, and encouragement. Thank you. Notice: - I used a contraction (I've). This helps create a semi-formal style, which is appropriate for an "exit" speech like this. - I changed "big" to large ("big" can sound a bit informal) - "Thank you for the kind words" is almost a set phrase, a lexical chunk, in English - I used "company" like an adjective in "company processes." This sounds more professional, in my opinion. Your speech was well-written to begin with, but I think my suggestions are helpful. Good luck with the speech!
2024年5月19日
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