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Noemí Villagómez
Hi everybody, could somebody please help me by checking the following paragraph by seeing if everything is correct? I am writing my resume. Thanks in advance.
“Director’s Assistance
•Managed the schedule of the Direction of New Business Development.
•Managed programs with with UNICEF to promete projects abroad, obtaining financial reimbursement for the company.
•Organized and coordinated national and foreign events.
•Created executive presentations.
•Managed expenses.”
2020年11月9日 21:29
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Hello, Noemí. You did an exceptional job on your resume, however, I can correct a few mistakes that you made:
"Managed programs with UNICEF to promote projects abroad, and obtained reimbursement for the company"
"Organized and coordinated national/foreign events" (work on limiting the use of "and" within a sentence by replacing it with punctuation.)
Best of luck with your resume and interview!
2020年11月9日
1
Hi Noemí!
I agree with all the above corrections suggested by Brandon.
I do have a few additional questions/suggestions:
1) Is “Director’s Assistance” your job title? If so, it’s likely you want to say “Director’s Assistant” instead. If your job is to assist/help the director, your title is likely “Director’s Assistant.”
2) When you say “Managed the schedule of the Direction of New Business Development,” is “Direction of New Business Development” the title of the person whose schedule you managed? If “Direction of New Business Development is a person’s job title, the title is most likely supposed to be “Director of New Business Development.”
The director is the person who gives directions/instructions.
If that’s not someone’s job title, disregard my second suggestion.
Let me know if you need further clarification or help!
2020年11月10日
Hi. I want to practice English.
2020年11月10日
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Noemí Villagómez
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