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Today, I went to Hottarakashi Onsen with my coworkers. There were fifteen of us. Everyone gets along well, from high school students to full-time employees. We left after our part-time jobs and ate ramen on the way. Then, we drove to Yamanashi Prefecture to see the sunrise. Many things happened during the trip, but everything was so much fun. After enjoying the hot springs, we visited a famous pond. The scenery was beautiful and amazing. After that, we played volleyball together at a nearby place. I had a wonderful time with everyone. I want to go on another trip with them someday!

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Today, I went to Hottarakashi Onsen with my coworkers. There were fifteen of us. Everyone gets along well, from high school students to full-time employees. We left after our part-time jobs and ate ramen on the way. Then, we drove to Yamanashi Prefecture to see the sunrise. Many things happened during the trip, but everything was so much fun. After enjoying the hot springs, we visited a famous pond. The scenery was beautiful and amazing. After that, we played volleyball together at a nearby place. I had a wonderful time with everyone. I want to go on another trip with them someday!
Your writing is really good! Everything is clear, and I can imagine how much fun the trip was. 😊 One small suggestion: instead of “The scenery was beautiful and amazing,” you could say “The scenery was absolutely stunning” to make it sound a little more natural. I’d love to visit a place like that someday!

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