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As is depicted in the illustration, a boy holding a mobile phone in his hand is talking with the girl sitting beside him: "Why you came to library , all resources can be found online." This drawing demonstrate a phenomenon that numerous youngsters nowadays regard internet as omnipotent. There is no deny that the drastic development of technology has provided us with easy access to rich resources. However, it also has countless drawbacks. Firstly, a great deal of misleading information will hinder us from approaching truth and distort our thoughts. Additionally, compare to paper reading, it is more likely to be distracted by those recreational contents when scrolling through websites. As well as that, excessive reliance on online information will impair our thinking ability. In conclusion, internet is a double-edged sword. Living in a era of information, we are expected to develop independent and critical thinking and don't discard paper reading, thus we will be able to tell the truth from fake news online and utilize the advantages of internet to the utmost.
2023年12月18日 15:50
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As is depicted in the illustration, a boy holding a mobile phone in his hand is talking with the girl sitting beside him: "Why have you come to the library, all resources can be found online." This drawing demonstrate a phenomenon that numerous youngsters nowadays regard the internet as omnipotent. There is no denying that the rapid development of technology has provided us with easy access to rich resources. However, it also has countless drawbacks. Firstly, the great deal of misleading information found online will hinder us from finding truth and will affect our thoughts. Additionally, compared to reading books, people are more likely to be distracted by recreational content when scrolling through websites. As well as that, excessive reliance on online information will impair our thinking ability. (Why?) In conclusion, the internet is a double-edged sword. Living in an era of information, we should develop independent and critical thinking and not discard paper reading. In this way we will be able to tell the truth from fake news online and utilize the advantages of the internet to the utmost.
Good. Just make sure you explain your ideas a little more rather than stating opinion as fact.
2023年12月18日
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