Can someone please help me with my sample sentences?
I have a question. I work with alot of korean people who come to the airport who cannot speak ANY english whatsoever. It is very awkward sometimes when they come through security and I have to take things out of their bag without being able to explain why they can’t have the items. Please help me correct my sentences to make them sound more natural. The last sentence is a little to advanced for me. Can I please get some help on that one? 감사합니다!!

I have to take a look inside your bag for a moment.
이 가방 잠깐만 들여다봐야 돼요.

do you have any other baggage here?
다른 짐은 여기 있나요?

gather the rest of you bags and please follow me.
가방들를 모이하고 따라오세요.

You can’t take this thing with you.
이것 가져가안 돼요.

you can keep this item if you check your bag in, if not you will have to leave it here. Would you like to check you bag in?

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Can someone please help me with my sample sentences?
I have a question. I work with alot of korean people who come to the airport who cannot speak ANY english whatsoever. It is very awkward sometimes when they come through security and I have to take things out of their bag without being able to explain why they can’t have the items. Please help me correct my sentences to make them sound more natural. The last sentence is a little to advanced for me. Can I please get some help on that one? 감사합니다!!

I have to take a look inside your bag for a moment.
이 가방 잠깐만 들여다봐야 돼요.

do you have any other baggage here?
다른 짐은 여기 있나요?

gather the rest of you bags and please follow me.
가방들를 모이하고 따라오세요.

You can’t take this thing with you.
이것 가져가안 돼요.

you can keep this item if you check your bag in, if not you will have to leave it here. Would you like to check you bag in?

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I see, here you are.^^

I have to take a look inside your bag for a moment.
이 가방 잠깐만 들여다봐야 돼요.
☞ 가지고 계신 가방 안을 봐야 해요.

do you have any other baggage here?
다른 짐은 여기 있나요?
☞ 여기에 다른 짐이 (더) 있나요?

gather the rest of you bags and please follow me.
가방들를 모이하고 따라오세요.
☞ 나머지 가방을 가지고 절 따라오세요.

You can’t take this thing with you.
이것 가져가안 돼요.
☞ 이것을 가져가시면 안 돼요.

you can keep this item if you check your bag in, if not you will have to leave it here. Would you like to check you bag in?
☞ 가방을 검사한 다음에 이 것(this item)을 가지고 가실 수 있습니다.
그렇지 않으면 여기에 놔두고 가야 합니다.
가지고 계신 가방을 검사하시겠습니까? 
(would you like to check your bag in?)

\^o^/

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i speak three languages chinese (mandarin), korean and english but english is wat im still learning as my third language and the way i speak korean is different from south korean. its like um....australian english and american english and btw theres no right way to speak english. every1 has different accent.anyway,

excuseme, i need to cheque ur bagages for security reason.
죄송한데요. 저 가방 한번 채크해봐도 될까요?  

is there any other bagage  
이외에 다른 빼끄가 있나요?

take ur bags and come with me, PLEAS
가방을 갖고 이 쪽으로 오시겠어요?

im sry u cant keep this item/thing with u....
죄송한데요, 이건 키프 못 하는데요.

sry i suggest u to chek this bag in if u need to take this with u or ill have to ask u to leave it here
죄송한데요, 빼끄를 채크해야 이것 통행 가능하는데요, 아니면 안되거든요 

i ummm sort of changed ur english as well. no offence just tot it would b more appropriate

cheers!