Which one is better?
I did 2 sound record in English and I'd like to know which one sounds more like a native speaker and also where should I correct it.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1v5M3w6YSnG or
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0QnrUfldRJf

Question

Which one is better?
I did 2 sound record in English and I'd like to know which one sounds more like a native speaker and also where should I correct it.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1v5M3w6YSnG  or
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0QnrUfldRJf

Answer

I prefer the second.
 
Make sure you watch your pronunciation of the word popular, third, either, and youngsters.

Instead of 'the most wide taught language' you need ' the most widely taught language'

At about 0:03- 0:05 I cannot understand you. "There's no school... Primary or Secondary."