Iris
Does this sentence sound right? Children learn love and compassion through communication with pets as early as in their childhood.
2014年8月28日 16:56
回答 · 14
Not really. 'As early as' needs a more precise term to follow it, such as a specific age or time. 'Childhood' is too general a term. Also, we know from the beginning of the sentence that we are talking about children, so the word 'childhood' isn't telling us anything new.
2014年8月28日
Я бы заменила as early as in their childhood на very early - а то получается, что "дети учатся уже в детстве". Но тут надо пересмотреть смысл самой фразы, а не грамматику.
2014年8月28日
Thank you, Morghanna.
2014年8月29日
The sentence could be posed: children learn love and compassion through communication with pets in their early childhood.
2014年8月28日
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