della
could someone revise this sentence for me, many thanks~~ a contract(trade) volume of 3 billion for international geographical indication products is achieved at the symposium.
2014年10月30日 08:29
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Della, part of this sentence can be revised, but part of the phrasing is not reasonable to begin with. The part which can be revised would read as follows: "A trade volume of 3 billion dollars for international products was achieved at the symposium." The phrase about "geographical indication" is unclear and I do not see how to use it.
2014年10月30日
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