How do I say to invite mentor to come to my "working in progress" show? That is what I wrote: "we are having a “Working in Progress” show of MA Industrial design’s final projects on 13th January. I wo

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How do I say to invite mentor to come to my "working in progress" show? That is what I wrote: "we are having a “Working in Progress” show of MA Industrial design’s final projects on 13th January. I would like to invite you to come, if the time suits your agenda." Thank you very much for any valuable advices!

2014年12月19日 01:30

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That sounds good! But I would make a few small changes; I'd like to invite you to a "Work in Progress" show of MA Industrial Design final projects on January 13th, if the time suits your schedule.

2014年12月19日

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