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FOUR SENTENCES Can you explain my mistakes thanks for help However, some people argue that life consists of more important things than health. They are sure that a lot of money, fame and a successful career may provide a happy life even if you are sick. I consider that health is the key to happy life. the consuequences of any serious diseases can affect on your futire
2015年4月25日 13:48
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Two fixes: "...the key to a happy life." "...can affect your future." (You confused "affect" with another word. Also, check the spelling for consequence.)
2015年4月25日
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