i need your help. Is it gramatically right? My name is Maria Khutornaya and I’m 23 years old. Now I study at Bryansk State University named after Academician I.G. Petrovsky at faculty of technology an

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i need your help. Is it gramatically right? My name is Maria Khutornaya and I’m 23 years old. Now I study at Bryansk State University named after Academician I.G. Petrovsky at faculty of technology and design to become a fine arts teacher. In 2013 I finished school and entered Oryol State University named after I.S. Turgenev to study soil science. In 2017 I graduated with distinction from the university. My family is consists of my parents, my brother and me. I was born in Bryansk region, Klimovsky district, Rubezhnoe village, but I live in Bryansk now. I like drawing so I decided to become a teacher of art. Besides, my hobbies are reading books and needlework. I think that’s the most interesting facts about me.

2019年1月6日 10:06

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It's not grammatically perfect but it is passable and understandable for sure. With some more practice you'll develop a more naturally fluent writing style. It's clear you have the knowledge and skills, it won't be long before you tie everything up together and you'll be writing as if English is your mother language.

2019年1月6日

You did great actually

2019年1月6日

It's not a question, it's rather a kind of CV. I think it would be better to put it in the "notebook" (https://www.italki.com/notebooks/english), which is meant specially to put there texts (essays, notes, etc) that are expected to be corrected. You'll have much better chances there.

2019年1月6日