Is this ok?Although a Chinese poem only have 4 to 8 lines, you can still have a deep sense of ...
Is this ok?Although a Chinese poem only have 4 to 8 lines, you can still have a deep sense of happiness or sadness.

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Is this ok?Although a Chinese poem only have 4 to 8 lines, you can still have a deep sense of ...
Is this ok?Although a Chinese poem only have 4 to 8 lines, you can still have a deep sense of happiness or sadness.

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Needs small tweaks.

Although Chinese poems only have 4 to 8 lines, you can still have a deep sense of happiness or sadness.
or
Although a Chinese poem only has 4 to 8 lines, you can still have a deep sense of happiness or sadness.
Going even further, ..
Although a Chinese poem might only have 4 to 8 lines, you can still have a deep sense of happiness or sadness (from it).
Although a Chinese poem might only have 4 to 8 lines, it can still give you a deep sense of happiness or sadness.

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"Although a Chinese poem only has four to eight lines, it can convey a deep sense of happiness or sadness." (not "having a sense of happiness", "still" doesn't add anything  )

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Although a Chinese poem only has four to eight lines, it can still have a deep sense of happiness or sadness.

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