It's great. I had only a few minor things to comment on. (Easier to annotate in the notebook section :) ) Dear Julia, Thanks for your letter. It was great to hear from you. I really should have written sooner. I wanted to answer you immediately after receiving your letter, but I was working a lot during the last two weeks. How are you? <Changed "letter. But" into "letter, but". One sentence. I am glad your family are going to open a restaurant. It is great! There are a lot of tasty dishes in Ukrainian cuisine but the most famous are Borshch and Vareniki. The Borshch is a vegetable soup. The Vareniki: a boiled unleavened dough with different fillings (potatoes, meat, vegetables). Is this "Borscht"? English spelling may vary form place to place. Searching gets me " Pierogi and vareniki are actually the same thing." The musical art of the Ukraine is very rich. or The music and art of the Ukraine are very rich. The best Ukrainian pop singers are : Jamala, Ruslana; group: “MARUV”, “KAZKA”, “Okean Elzy” Added "are" The decorations typical of the Ukraine are ryshnyk, Petrikovskiy painting, jug, and wreath. Traditional structure is list item, list item, list item and list item. or if you are American Traditional structure is list item, list item, list item, and list item. <-- comma before "and" - an American thing. Best regards, Daria.