Plz help me to correct English sentence🙏
In 2018, the Korean government awarded Captain Conrado D Yap
the Taegeuk Order of Military Merit, the highest honor
in recognition of his courage, responsibility, and contribution

Please make this sentence correct more natural?
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Plz help me to correct English sentence🙏
In 2018, the Korean government awarded Captain Conrado D Yap
the Taegeuk Order of Military Merit, the highest honor
in recognition of his courage, responsibility, and contribution

Please make this sentence correct more natural?
I need your help... thank you

Answer

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Answer

In 2018, the Korean government awarded Captain Conrado D Yap
the Taegeuk Order of Military Merit, the highest honor,
in recognition of his courage, responsibility, and contribution.