帮我修改英文日记，谢谢。 A Japanese friend sent me an e-mail the day before yesterday. He says he has a new way to learn Japanese. He wants me to make a MP3 file of my reading aloud, and write what I say and send it to heim. I let him hear me read aloud and he helps me by making a MP3 file of him reading aloud.if he found I have problem from learn Japanese and can tell my what problem and what notice, when he writted and sent it to my E-mail, he let me hear me read aloud and he want me read aloud. 前天晚上有个日本人发给我电子邮箱，他说到新的学习法，叫我把自己朗读做录音成MP3文件和文字发给他，他听听，他帮我朗读做录音成MP3文件，如果他发现我有问题，会告诉我说有什么问题注意什么，他写完了就发给我电子邮箱，叫听听他的朗读，叫我再次朗读。 我写英文日记，在语法上有错误吗？帮我修改一下。谢谢。