Please can you tell me if I wrote this article correctly? Does it seem good to write it as an article ? You can feel free to correct me , I feel like it is short and is not more like an article . Lina is my ideal person . She is 13 years old . She has got brown eyes and black hair . She is slim and of fair complexion . She wears a blue skirt with a beautiful T-shirt and a bright and comfortable shoes from a famous brand . Moreover, she is very friendly , sociable , patient, caring , selfless and honest . Sometimes she becomes aggressive and stubborn , but still she is a kind hearted person in my eyes. She is very interested in sewing, volunteering, travelling, blogging, playing sports and music. She is only a grade 7 student and she currently is not working. To sum up , I am sure that she is is the best friend of mine and my only ideal person in this life , because she is a unique person . She helps all the people around her and she is always humorous and she is well mannered and that makes her my one and only ideal person