From my point of view, to stay fit you need to have a strong motivation first of all. If you have that, all seems to be easier. Secondly you have to find the balance that let you keep the same rhythm

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From my point of view, to stay fit you need to have a strong motivation first of all. If you have that, all seems to be easier. Secondly you have to find the balance that let you keep the same rhythm for long time

2021年9月18日 16:16

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First of all, you need to have strong motivation to stay fit. If you have that, all seems to be easier. Secondly, you have to find a balance that lets you keep the same rhythm for long time

Hi Using both “from my point of view” and “first of all” is not needed! The question is being answered by you so it’s from your point of view anyway :) Also note the placement of commas as well as subtle word changes that make the biggest difference! Hope this helps :)

2021年9月18日

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