wendy
When you lose the hope of furture, and don't know what should to do except eating and sleeping. In that case, you are sensitive, and everything can easily make you angry. What if you are full of passion and understand all the purpose of the things you just doing, will you still easily get angry? This reminds me of a saying that says :a pair of poor couple won't do anything correctly, their life is full of argument. Though I don't think that money is everything, Money is one of the symbols of success. It can prove you are hardworking. when you have a lot of work to do, it's not worth thinking about other things which might make you angry. So, if you are always angry, try to let youself to be busy. This is a treat way to help you get out of bad mood. We should realize what things can make you angry and try our best to avoid doing them again. The world is bright, darkness will fade sooner or later. Let's take a deep breathe and stretch our arms to hold the sunlight.
2023年10月27日 08:57
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When you lose hope for the future and don't know what to do besides eating and sleeping, you become sensitive. Everything can easily make you angry. However, if you are full of passion and understand the purpose of everything you're doing, it's less likely that you'll get angry. It's said that a financially struggling couple tends to argue more. While I don't believe that money is everything, it is a symbol of success. It can indicate hard work. When you're busy with meaningful work, you often don't have the time to dwell on things that might upset you. If you find yourself constantly angry, keeping yourself busy might be a good way to improve your mood. It's essential to recognize the triggers of your anger and avoid them. The world is a bright place, and darkness will pass. Let's take a deep breath and reach out to embrace the sunlight.
Your piece highlights the importance of passion, purpose, and staying occupied to maintain a positive mindset. You've touched on a universal feeling, where lack of purpose can lead to heightened sensitivities. Your advice about keeping busy to stave off negative feelings is insightful. Remember to ensure clarity in your sentences for better reader comprehension. I appreciate your optimistic conclusion about embracing the light. Keep writing, and always focus on channeling positivity in your words!
2023年10月27日
When you lose hope in the future and when you don't know what to do except eating and sleeping, you become sensitive / irritable, and anything can easily make you angry. What if you are full of passion and understand the purpose of all the things you do, will you still get angry so easily? This reminds me of a saying that goes as: a mismatched couple won't be able to do anything correctly as they’ll spend most of their time arguing. Though I don't think that money is everything, it is a symbol of success and it can prove you are hardworking. When you have a lot of work to do, it's not worth thinking about anything that might make you angry. So, if you are always angry, try to keep yourself busy, it’ll help you improving your mood. We should be aware of what can make us angry and try our best to avoid it. The world is bright, darkness will fade sooner or later. Let's take a deep breath and stretch our arms towards the sunlight.
2023年10月27日
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