You did great! Things I would change are: • "Sorry for not replying earlier because I've been busy with finals." to "Sorry for not replying sooner; I've been busy with finals." > Note that, if you are not busy with finals anymore, you should say "I was busy with finals". "I have been" indicated that you are still in the process of doing an action or dealing with a situation. • "... you asked me about Russian singer." to "... you asked me about Russian singers" (It implies variety, and generalization.) • "He won Eurovision competition award, too" to "He won the Eurovision competition, too". And, unless the award he won was from the last contest, it's better to use "He HAS won an/the Eurovision award, too." • "... I was at his concert..." to "I went to his concert in Moscow..." Now, your version is not wrong, per se; however, when we go to a place or event the verb "Go/Went/Will go" is most likely used to refer to that action. I love your calligraphy! 💜 Keep in mind these are just suggestions. You did an excellent job! Keep it up!

Hi, David. Overall, you did a good job with the letter. However, “He has been singing...” is an independent clause, as is “He won (a/the) Eurovision competition...” Thus, you need both a comma and the word “and,” not just “and” to join them properly together as one sentence. Also, the difference between “this” and “that” generally has to do with proximity. As we can easily see the picture you posted (or if you had posted text instead), it is considered close to us, so you should write “Please help me to check this!” Yet, even for items that are not that far apart (e.g., one apple is 2 feet away from you, but another is 3 feet away), we would still use “this” for the closest one, but “that” for the other one (“I want this one, not that one!”). I hope that this helps you... (not “I hope that that helps you.”) (*-^)

Everything is perfect, except write, “you asked me about Russian singers”