Ei Ei shwe zin
Looking back, it was really embarrassing. It was a day I can never forget and this memory has sticked with me for a long time. I was returning to my classroom after I had bought a cup of noodle soup. There was a shower of rain and the roads were slippery. I slipped and fell on the ground. The noodles that I bought scattered around the road . I also got a bruise on my knee. Everyone was looking and laughing at me. I was very happy to get their attention. I picked myself up and ran to the toilet. I felt a little upset at that time but , now it's a ridiculous experience for me. If you notice the mistakes, please correct me?
2023年8月5日 12:12
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It's a nice text. "This memory has STUCK with me for a long time" "...scattered OVER the road" And I'm confused as to why you were happy to get their attention, because the rest of the text implies that you were embarrassed.
2023年8月5日
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