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The diagram gives information about the production of cement and concrete by displaying the materials and equipment in a flow chart.
It is clear that limestone and clay are the raw materials for cement. After passing through the crusher and a cylinder mixer, we will get
mixed powders. The next step is to cook the powders by conveying them into a rotating heater. In order to get finer grains, the cooked powders will then be processed in a grinder. In the end, we get cement and package it into bags.
As for concrete production, the process is much simpler than cement production: adding all ingredients into a concrete mixer. The key part is the proportion. Gravel takes the largest part with 50%, which is twice amount of sand at 25%. Cement accounts for 15%, and the remaining 10% is water. After processing, we will finally get concrete.
Cement is a crucial ingredient in concrete, which is made of limestone and clay.
2023년 4월 16일 오후 4:57
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The diagrams give information about the production of cement and concrete by
displaying the materials and equipment in two charts. Limestone and clay are the raw materials for cement. After passing through a
crusher and a cylinder mixer, mixed powders are produced. The next step is to
cook the powders by conveying them into a rotating heater. In order to get finer
grains, the cooked powders will then be processed in a grinder. Finally, the cement is packaged into bags. As for concrete production, the process is
much simpler than cement production as all the constituents are poured into a concrete
mixer. The key part is the proportion. Gravel diagrams takes the largest part with 50%,
which is twice amount of sand at 25%. Cement accounts for 15%, and the remaining
10% is water. After processing, concrete is produced. Cement is a
crucial ingredient in concrete, which is made up of limestone and clay.
With processes passive is the key. You can mention how many stages there are. You don’t need a summing up, it can all be done in the first paragraph.
The pictures describe the five stages in the manufacture of cement, including the machinery needed, followed by its use in the production of concrete for construction purposes.
2023년 4월 16일
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