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The diagram describes the seven stages of sugar production from growing sugar canes to crushing the juice, then after some processing, to final sugar powder. At the beginning, it takes 12-18 months to grow ripe sugarcanes. After harvesting by equipment and manually process, these sugarcanes are crushed in a machine and extracted to juice. The next step involves purifying the juice using a limestone filter, resulting in a relatively pure liquid. In the following stage, the liquid is poured into an evaporator. Once the juice has become syrup by heat, it should be moved to a centrifuge for the next processing, and then the separates sugar crystals are made. In the final step, the sugar particles will be dried and cooled in a container. As one of the most common crops, sugarcane is the crucial main source of sugar. There are almost no other additives required in the production of sugarcane.
2023년 4월 19일 오후 4:16
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The diagram describes the seven stages of sugar production from growing sugar canes to producing juice, then after some processing, to the final sugar powder. At the beginning, it takes 12-18 months to grow ripe sugarcanes. After harvesting, either by using agricultural equipment or by a manual process, the sugarcanes are crushed in a machine to extract the juice. The next step involves purifying the juice using a limestone filter, resulting in a relatively pure liquid. In the following stage, the liquid is poured into an evaporator. Once the juice has been heated to become syrup, it is put in to a centrifuge that separates sugar crystals from the syrup. In the final step, the sugar particles will be dried and cooled in a container. As one of the most common crops, sugarcane is the crucial main source of sugar. There are almost no other additives required in the production of sugarcane. (You don’t need the last paragraph. A process doesn’t need a summary - the initial description of the stages does that.)
Very good in general. Not many errors.
2023년 4월 19일
The diagram describes the seven stages of sugar production from growing sugar canes to crushing to produce juice, then after some processing, to final sugar powder. In the beginning, it takes 12-18 months to grow ripe sugarcanes. After harvesting by equipment and manually processing, these sugarcanes are crushed in a machine and extracted to produce juice. The next step involves purifying the juice using a limestone filter, resulting in a relatively pure liquid. In the following stage, the liquid is poured into an evaporator. Once the juice has become syrup by heat, it should be moved to a centrifuge for the next stage of processing, and then the separate sugar crystals are made. In the final step, the sugar particles will be dried and cooled in a container. As one of the most common crops, sugarcane is the crucial main source of sugar. There are almost no other additives required in the production of sugarcane.
2023년 4월 19일
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