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Yesterday was a live concert in the rain.
It was my first outdoor live show, but the rain made it even cooler. It was the best!
2025년 6월 15일 오전 6:16
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Yesterday was a live concert in the rain. It was my first outdoor live show, but
the rain made it even cooler. It was the best!
Great writing, you sound very natural! 🌟
2025년 6월 15일 오전 7:31
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