During Silver Week, I spent time with my family. First, we visited my grandmother. We talked together and had a meal at her house. After that, we went to my relative’s house. There were a cat and a dog, so I played with them for a while. I also spent some time with my relatives. On the day we went home, it rained very heavily because of a typhoon. We had to be careful because of the bad weather. The next day, I had a part-time job. It was the busiest day I have ever had at work. I was very busy from the beginning to the end of my shift. The following day, I went to Shibuya to take a test. I studied a little before the test and then went home after it.
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During Silver Week, I spent time with my family. First, we visited my
grandmother. We talked together and had a meal at her house. After that, we went
to my relative’s house. There were a cat and a dog, so I played with them for a
while. I also spent some time with my relatives. On the day we went home, it
rained very heavily because of a typhoon. We had to be careful because of the
bad weather. The next day, I had a/my part-time job. It was the busiest day I have
ever had at work. I was very busy from the beginning to the end of my shift. The
following day, I went to Shibuya to take a test. I studied a little before the
test and then went home after it.
Well done. You write very well. Keep it up!
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