Nakajiii
I think that the greatest basist is Paul McCartney. I like his soft sound. Just like a cloud! Additionally, he has a good voice. I love his high-tone voice.
2025년 5월 9일 오전 7:14
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“I think the greatest bassist is Paul McCartney. I like his soft sound—just like a cloud! Additionally, he has a great voice. I love his high-pitched tone.”
The correct word is “bassist” (not “basist”), and when describing voices, we often say “high-pitched” instead of “high-tone.” Also, use dashes or commas to connect short emotional thoughts like “just like a cloud!”
2025년 5월 10일 오전 9:00
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