I think China should be one of the most diversified countries in the world. There are 56 nationalities in China in terms of different culture and history root, and everyone has their own local dialec

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I think China should be one of the most diversified countries in the world. There are 56 nationalities in China in terms of different culture and history root, and everyone has their own local dialect. Han is the majority group, which accounts for 92% out of total population. So you will probably meet Han people if you go to most of the cities in China. The minority groups mostly live in the west and southwest of China, they will have their own festivals, costume, food habits, and even believes. The language also differs based on different areas people are living, so there is no exact number of how many languages are spoken. So it is so common that when you go to another city and you can't understand their language. I think being culture diversified and being international is happening at the same time. So every group is not isolated, everyone can be connected through speaking Mandarin and the respect for each other's cultures.

2024년 7월 4일 오전 8:59

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I think China should be one of the most diversified countries in the world. There are 56 nationalities in China in terms of different cultures and historical roots, and each one has their own local dialect. Han is the majority group, which accounts for 92% out of the total population. So you will probably meet Han people if you go to most of the cities in China. The minority groups mostly live in the west and southwest of China, and they will have their own festivals, costume, food habits, and even beliefs. The language also differs based on different areas in which people are living, so there is no exact number of how many languages are spoken. So it is very common that when you go to another city, you can't understand their language. I think being culturally diversified and being international is happening at the same time. So every group is not isolated, since everyone can be connected through speaking Mandarin and the respect for each other's cultures.

Let's think about "should" in the first sentence. When I read that, I thought you meant this was what you hoped for the future. But it sounds like you are saying that this is probably the case now, in which case—if you believe that—you can write "might be" or "could be" instead, which would be clearer. If you're confident about it, you can write "is probably" instead.

2024년 7월 4일

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