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When the baby is one month old, his or her parents will make a feast and the relatives and friends will have a fancy meal together to celebrate the birth of the baby. The guests will also give a red envelope to the baby to show their best wishes.
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2024년 1월 8일 오전 6:35
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When the baby is one month old, his or her parents will prepare a feast and the relatives and friends of the parents will have a fancy meal together to celebrate the birth of the baby. The guests will also give a red envelope to the baby to show their best wishes.
Your pronunciation is very good, keep it up.
2024년 1월 8일
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When the baby is one month old, his or her parents will prepare a feast, and relatives and friends will join them for a fancy meal to celebrate the baby's birth. The guests will also give a red envelope to the baby, showing their best wishes.
It's great to see how you've shared the beautiful tradition of celebrating a baby's one-month birthday. Your description of the feast and the giving of red envelopes paints a vivid picture. To enhance your writing, focus on punctuation, like commas, to break up ideas smoothly. Also, consider varying sentence structures to create a more engaging narrative. Keep up the good work, and continue to share these wonderful cultural details!
2024년 1월 8일
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