Jerry Smith helped to the story continues in favor of his other family members twice. Once in the episode of the parallel world and another is the episode of the ship's adventure. These were moments h

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Jerry Smith helped to the story continues in favor of his other family members twice. Once in the episode of the parallel world and another is the episode of the ship's adventure. These were moments he was being an paid actor in a show. This show is deep.

2024년 8월 17일 오전 3:01

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Jerry Smith contributed to advancing the story in favor of his family members on two different occasions: once in the episode set in a parallel world and another in the episode about the ship adventure. These were moments when he was a paid actor in the show. This show is deep.

Is this about Rick & Morty? I don't know much about it, but hopefully these corrections help.

2024년 8월 18일

Jerry Smith helped continue the story in favor of his other family members twice. Once in the episode of the parallel world and another was in the episode of the ship's adventure. These were moments when he was a paid actor in a show. This show is profound.

修改说明： “helped to” 表述不准确，应改为 “helped continue”； “another is” 应改为 “another was”，以保持时态一致； “being an paid actor” 应改为 “a paid actor”，“an” 使用错误，且 “being” 多余； “deep” 形容 “show” 不太恰当，改为 “profound” 更合适，表示 “深刻的”。

2024년 8월 17일

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