Caril
I work at a university as a researcher, I design the hardware of Internet of Things applications that are developed there. I also write reports about the results of the experiments of each application. I like my job and I want to keep studying in order to improve my engineering skills.
2021년 2월 26일 오전 3:55
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I work at a university as a researcher; I design the hardware of Internet of Things applications that are developed there. I also write reports about the results of the experiments of each application (or maybe "experiments that are done for each application"). I like my job and I want to keep studying in order to improve my engineering skills. This looks fine. The only other tiny change I made was to change a comma to a semicolon in the first sentence. (The reason: both parts of the sentence were 100% complete sentences on their own, so they cannot be connected with a comma).
2021년 2월 27일
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