Nisey
I admire my psychology professor. I admired her passion for teaching and her willingness to always be available for her students. I believe a lot of qualities aren't necessary for someone you would look up for. I believe that most of the people we surround ourselves with are worthy of admiration, we just need to be better at observing them, and be less judgmental.
2020년 12월 5일 오전 4:35
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I admire my psychology professor. I admired her passion for teaching and her
willingness to always be available for her students. I believe a lot of
qualities aren't necessary for someone you would look up to. I believe that
most of the people we surround ourselves with are worthy of admiration, we just
need to be better at observing them, and be less judgmental.
2020년 12월 5일
1
I admire my psychology professor. I admire her passion for teaching and her
willingness to always be available for her students. I believe a lot of
qualities aren't necessary for someone you look up to. I believe that
most of the people we surround ourselves with are worthy of admiration, we just
need to be better at observing them, and be less judgmental.
Hi there,
You started with present tense but in the next sentence you changed the tense to past. Keep that in mind.
But overall great job. ☺️👏🏻
2020년 12월 5일
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