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LUCY
There was no night worse than today!
The annoying buzz of mosquitoes echoed in my ears. No matter how I covered my ears, I could hear the slight buzz in the darkness. Not bearing for it any more, I got out of my bed, switched on the light and quickly looked around, determined to swat mosquitoes. Though the buzz still existed, I couldn't find any mosquitoes. Eventually, I had no alternative but to have a sleep with the light on, which I didn't get used to. However, the moment I was about to fall asleep, the chirp of birds came out of the window and woke me up again. It was dwan! Unknowingly, I stayed up late owing to the tiresome buzz of mosquitoes!
Well, personally speaking, I like every aspect of Summer except the mosquitoes.
2024년 6월 9일 오후 9:05
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Hello Lucy, this is a great piece! Well done! I have included a few edits below for your consideration. :)
There was no night worse than today!
The annoying buzz of mosquitoes echoed in my ears. No matter how much I covered my ears, I could hear the slight buzz in the darkness. Unable to bear it any more, I got out of my bed, switched on the light and quickly looked around, determined to swat mosquitoes. Though the buzz still existed, I couldn't find any mosquitoes. Eventually, I had no alternative but to sleep with the light on, which I didn't get used to. However, the moment I was about to fall asleep, the sound of birds chirping came from outside the window and woke me up again. It was dawn! Unknowingly, I stayed up late because of the tiresome buzz of mosquitoes!
Well, personally speaking, I like every aspect of Summer except the mosquitoes.
You are an amazing writer. :) The piece is descriptive and I could feel the frustration that you felt with the mosquitos- nasty little buggers haha!
2024년 6월 10일
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중국어(북경어), 영어, 독일어, 이탈리아어
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영어, 독일어, 이탈리아어
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