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In my mind, the most important factor is the altitude towards others. Anyone who wants to gain healthy relationship with the people around, should definitely show the respect and willingness of communication. You can imagine that in a company or a family, people are able to understand each other better, when talking closely and valuing the work from other people. That is the first step we need to gain or improve the relationship with others.
2021년 6월 13일 오후 2:13
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In my mind, the most important factor (to having healthy relationships) with others is our ATTITUDE. (If SOMEONE) wants to IMPROVE their relationships, they should definitely show respect and willingness TO COMMUNICATE. As within a family, people need to speak TACTFULLY and value the other's CONTRIBUTIONS. That is the first step we need to TAKE to improve our relationship with others.
These are good ideas for health relationships! I have offered a few changes that I think might improve your meaning.
2021년 6월 13일
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