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There is such an important topic which would be benefical for both teachers and students if were taught in schools.Diet , it seems that nearly most pupiles tend to feed on fast food and junk food which are not healthy in any aspect.Teaching diet can help srudents realise the importance of eating well.
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There is such an important topic which would be beneficial for both teachers and students if we're taught in schools. Diet, it seems that nearly most pupils tend to feed on fast food and junk food which are not healthy in any aspect. Teaching diet can help students realize the importance of eating well.
2021년 6월 14일
A very important topic, which would be benefical for both teachers and students if it were taught in schools, is diet. It seems that most pupils tend
to feed on fast food and junk food, which are not healthy in any aspect. Teaching diet can help students realise the importance of eating well.
“Very” is much more natural than “such” in this case.
Nearly all = most (“nearly most” is like saying “most most”)
2021년 6월 14일
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