Sayed Nady
I think carefully when my daughter asks me to play with her a game of the mobile. Playing games may make her a playfully girl ,unresponsive, dependant. She is a child and must live her childhood . Confusing topic ,religion Islam warns us from playing but playing widen minds .Iam really confused about it.
2021년 6월 17일 오후 7:29
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I have to think carefully when my daughter asks me to play a game on the mobile phone. In the future, playing too many games may make her unresponsive and dependant. She is a child and must live and enjoy her childhood. It is a confusing topic. My religion, Islam, warns us from playing but playing widens minds .I am really confused about it.
Nady......I had a problem with sentence #2. I hope my corrections for that sentence is what you wanted to express.
2021년 6월 17일
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