Many countries around the world are struggling to address environmental challenges. One of them is pollution, which is significantly jeopardizing humans' life quality. In big cities, for instance, air

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Huan Ng

Many countries around the world are struggling to address environmental challenges. One of them is pollution, which is significantly jeopardizing humans' life quality. In big cities, for instance, air pollution has contributed to an increasing number of people suffering lung-related diseases. On the other hand, polluted rivers in poor countries have not only created a more serious health problem for residents who live adjacently but also made a country image hideous. *** Any professional correction would be highly appreciated***

2021년 6월 19일 오전 6:34

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Many countries around the world are struggling to address environmental challenges. One of these challenges is pollution, which significantly \ jeopardizes the quality of life for humans. In big cities, for instance, air pollution has contributed to an increasing number of people suffering lung-related diseases. Furthermore, polluted rivers in poor countries have not only created a more serious health problem for residents who live adjacently but also made a country image hideous. *** Any professional correction would be highly appreciated***

I would say "concerning" the global environmental problems we are facing

2021년 6월 19일

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I think you got several good suggestions but I’d like to add that In the last sentence instead of saying “but also made a country image hideous”, I suggest something like this: “but this also creates the image that this is an undesirable place to live.”

2021년 6월 21일

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