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carla
Of course! In my house, we separate the cardboard, plastic, glass and organic in different places to be able to recycle. So together we can help our planet to be better conserved and garbage to be recycled again.
2021년 6월 21일 오후 3:17
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Of course! In my house, we separate the cardboard, plastic, glass and organic in different places to be able to recycle. So together we can help our planet to be better conserved and garbage to be recycled again.
Thank you Thomas!
2021년 7월 15일
Of course! In my house, we separate the cardboard, plastic, glass and organic waste into different containers so we can recycle it. That way, garbage can be recycled, and together we can help our planet to be conserved.
Ive been quite picky because I can tell you’re good! Organic by itself means without chemicals, organic waste is garbage. You don’t need “again” with “recycle” because of the “re”. “Better conserved” isn’t wrong, it just sounds unnatural. I changed to sentence order at the end to sound more natural too… excellent work though!
2021년 6월 21일
Of course! In my house, we separate the cardboard, plastic, glass and organic in different places to be able to recycle. So together we can help our planet to be better conserved and garbage to be recycled again.
2021년 6월 21일
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