Ira Rass
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2021년 6월 23일 오전 1:34
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Hi Ira, That's a great answer. I want to correct one sentence- you can say " prior to the pandemic" and not " previous to the pandemic ". You can also add that- Because of the lockdowns and quarantine, people primarily relied on the Internet and the technology for their entertainment and recreation. So, we saw a surge in the popularity of the social media platforms like instagram , video sharing platforms like youtube , etc. Hope this helps
2021년 6월 23일
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Great job with this exercise! I believe that the way you entertain yourself in your country and the way we entertain ourselves in the United States is extremely similar. I myself often watch YouTube or subscribe to language learning channels. Great job!
2021년 6월 23일
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