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Hello, everyone!
I like to watch basketball. When I was a junior high school students, I belonged to basketball club. It was difficult for me to play basketball, but it was fun for me to take a shoot. I think that basketball is very cool! When I watch basketball, I'm excited.
If I made any mistakes, please correct them.
2021년 6월 24일 오전 12:54
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Hello, everyone! I like to watch basketball. When I was a junior high school
student, I belonged to a basketball club. It was difficult for me to play
basketball, but it was fun for me to take shots. I think that basketball is
very cool! When I watch basketball, I get excited. If I made any mistakes, please
correct them.
Hi, great attempt on this. Well done! I made afew corrections:
- student and not students as you are 1 person
- include "a" before basketball club
- have "take shots" as there would be many and not just one
- change the "I'm" excited which means you are excited now to "I get excited" as it refers to the point at which you watch basketball
Hope this helps but very well done, this was really good 👌
2021년 6월 24일
Hello, everyone! I like to watch basketball. When I was a junior high school
student, I belonged to a basketball club . It was difficult for me to play
basketball, but it was fun for me to take shots. I think that basketball is
very cool! When I watch basketball, I get excited. If I made any mistakes, please
correct them.
You can also say “When I was in middle school, I was on the basketball team”. It’s a lot more natural way to say that
2021년 6월 24일
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