1. “Visited a training session” → “Attended a training session”: “Attend” is the correct verb for events like training sessions. 2. “Organised” → “Organized”: “Organized” is the American spelling; “organised” is British. Use whichever is consistent with your style. 3. “Strategical thinking” → “Strategic thinking”: “Strategical” is rarely used; “strategic” is the standard term. 4. “In spite of the fact that” → “Although”: More concise and natural. 5. “Using this method it’s possible to succeed” → “This method is the key to success”: More natural phrasing. 6. “Besides work, such as in language learning, finance management and work-out routine” → “Not only to my work but also to other areas of my life, such as language learning, financial management, and my workout routine”: Improved clarity and structure. 7. “I have a room for improvement” → “I believe there is room for improvement”: More natural phrasing. 8. “May be longer” → “Could be longer”: “Could” is more appropriate than “may” in this context. 9. “I’m considering about having” → “I’m considering setting”: “Considering” is not followed by “about”; “setting” fits better. 10. “Understanding that everything is changing, including myself, really makes me doubt” → “Knowing that everything—including myself—is constantly changing makes me hesitant”: More natural and polished. If you’d like to refine your writing and speak more naturally in English, I’d be happy to help! Book a conversation lesson with me, and let’s practice together.