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Today, I slept for 14hours. I’m really glad I was able to get some good rest.
Today, I had a conversation with my father about the world.This summer, I’m thinking about traveling abroad with him.
He’s a fascinating person who knows a lot about many things.
2025년 5월 11일 오후 1:11
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Today, I slept for 14 hours. I’m really glad I was able to get some good rest.
I had a conversation with my father today about the world. This summer, I’m thinking about traveling abroad with him.
He’s a fascinating person who knows a lot about many things.
Alternative Version:
I slept for 14 hours today, and I’m so glad I got some good rest.
I also had a conversation with my father about the world. This summer, I’m planning to travel abroad with him.
He’s an incredibly interesting person who knows so much about everything.
Short Tip: When talking about events that happened today, you don’t need to repeat "today" in every sentence; just use it once. Additionally, "planning to" is often more natural than "thinking about" when referring to concrete future plans. Advice on Natural Flow of English: To make your writing sound more natural, vary your sentence structure by combining ideas where appropriate, and avoid repetition of phrases. Using words like "also" and "incredibly" can add variety and make the flow smoother.
2025년 5월 12일 오후 1:08
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