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90 day's training: Day 4
Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰
1) I spent this Sommer in Germany and Austria. I had a beautiful days and met some of my German and Austrian friends there.
2) It was really nice relaxing in rural Bavaria. Taking ships on a lake, cycling around a lake, drinking at a typical Bavarian restaurant, everything made me so happy.
3) I'm into Bavarian crime fictions. I bought 10 German books on this trip. That made my luggage too heavy.
4) I like watching some German TV programmes in my free time. I was trying watching some YouTube videos in English, but it is still not easy, even Paw Patrol which is one of animal animations for kids.
5) I sometimes had to communicate in English on this trip. Therefore I thought I should learn English more.
2024년 9월 6일 오전 7:32
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90 day's training: Day 4
Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰
1) I spent this Summer in Germany and Austria. I had many beautiful days and met some of my German and Austrian friends there.
2) It was really nice relaxing in rural Bavaria. Taking boat trips on a lake, cycling around a lake, and drinking at a typical Bavarian restaurant, everything made me so happy.
3) I'm into Bavarian crime fictions. I bought 10 German books on this trip. That made my luggage too heavy.
4) I like watching some German TV programmes in my free time. I was trying to watch some YouTube videos in English, but it is still not easy for me, even Paw Patrol which is one of animal animations for kids.
5) I sometimes had to communicate in English on this trip. Therefore I thought I should learn more English.
Putting more after the noun is a common mistake English learners make.
2024년 9월 6일
90 day's training: Day 4
Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰
1) I spent this summer in Germany and Austria. The days were beautiful and I met some of my German and Austrian friends there.
2) It was really nice relaxing in rural Bavaria. Taking ships on a lake, cycling around a lake, drinking at a typical Bavarian restaurant, everything made me so happy.
3) I'm into Bavarian crime fiction. I bought 10 German books on this trip. That made my luggage so heavy.
4) I like watching some German TV programs in my free time. I tried to watch some YouTube videos in English, but it is still not easy, even Paw Patrol which is one of the animal animations for kids.
5) I sometimes had to communicate in English on this trip. Therefore I thought I should learn English more.
2024년 9월 6일
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