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Polly
My favorite hobby is playing volleyball. The volleyball develops speed and strength. I enjoy it because it is a team play. Also, I learn languages : english and chinese. I want to speak them perfectly. My hobbies are very interesting for me.
2020년 11월 13일 오후 5:31
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My favorite hobby is playing volleyball. Volleyball develops speed and
strength. I enjoy it because it is a team sport. Also, I like to learn languages:
English and Chinese. I want to speak them perfectly. My hobbies are very
interesting for me.
Just a few minor changes to make it flow more smoothly. Your message was very understandable.
2020년 11월 13일
My favorite hobby is playing volleyball. The volleyball develops speed and
strength. I enjoy it because it is a team play. Also, I learn languages :
english and chinese. I want to speak them perfectly. My hobbies are very
interesting for me.
Good text
2020년 11월 13일
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