My favorite hobby is playing volleyball. The volleyball develops speed and strength. I enjoy it because it is a team play. Also, I learn languages : english and chinese. I want to speak them perfectly

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My favorite hobby is playing volleyball. The volleyball develops speed and strength. I enjoy it because it is a team play. Also, I learn languages : english and chinese. I want to speak them perfectly. My hobbies are very interesting for me.

2020년 11월 13일 오후 5:31

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My favorite hobby is playing volleyball. Volleyball develops speed and strength. I enjoy it because it is a team sport. Also, I like to learn languages: English and Chinese. I want to speak them perfectly. My hobbies are very interesting for me.

Just a few minor changes to make it flow more smoothly. Your message was very understandable.

2020년 11월 13일