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Molly
I am sometimes slightly depressed and feel overwhemed or burnout. I think it is because I don't discipline my daily routine and my thoughts. There are many cures and joys if we try to find as long as you are a normal person who lead a not to hard or not too easy life.
2025년 6월 14일 오전 11:19
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I am sometimes slightly depressed and feel overwhelmed or burned out. I think it is because I lack self-discipline in my daily routine and my thoughts. There is relief and joy to be found as long as we remain balanced in a life that is neither too hard nor too easy.
Note the use of "we" instead of "you". "You" is correct, as is "I", but "we" has a nice feeling because it includes the reader.
2025년 6월 17일 오전 11:31
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I am sometimes slightly depressed and feel overwhelmed or burned out. I think it is because I don't stick enough to my daily routine and I don't focus enough on my thoughts. There are many cures and joys in life providing that we seek them and as long as we live as normal person who leads a life that neither too hard nor too easy.
Maybe you are pushing yourself too hard Molly and being too hard on yourself, that is probably why you are feeling so exhausted both mentally and physically. You need to give yourself little moments to unwind so you'll fell be able to keep up with whatever life is throwing at you. Take care Molly.
2025년 6월 14일 오전 11:52
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중국어(북경어), 영어, 프랑스어, 일본어, 한국어, 베트남어
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