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Rachel
Taking care of kids? It makes your lungs burst with anger, breaks your back, makes you go bald, and turns you into a ditz. Kids can be really cute sometimes, but when they're annoying, they're super annoying! You mop the floor and it gets dirty again. You tidy up the toys and they're in a mess again. After meals, you have to cook again. When the dishes are dirty, you have to wash them. When the clothes are dirty, you have to wash them. When the kids cry, you have to soothe them. You take care of them during the day and at night, today and tomorrow. Anyone would go crazy! Sometimes, I'd rather go to jail than take care of kids!
Please help me correct the grammatical errors.Thank you!
2025년 3월 9일 오전 4:27
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Taking care of kids? It makes your lungs burst with anger, breaks your back, makes you go bald, and turns you into a ditz. Kids can be really cute sometimes, but when they’re annoying, they’re super annoying! You mop the floor, and it gets dirty again. You tidy up the toys, and they’re a mess again. After meals, you have to cook again. When the dishes are dirty, you have to wash them. When the clothes are dirty, you have to wash them. When the kids cry, you have to soothe them. You take care of them during the day and at night, today and tomorrow. Anyone would go crazy! Sometimes, I’d rather go to jail than take care of kids!
Use commas for clarity in lists and repeated actions: “You mop the floor, and it gets dirty again.” This keeps your writing smooth and easy to read!
2025년 3월 10일
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