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Today, I finally got over my cold, so I've been doing what I like at home all the time. I watch my favorite anime and play games. But I have to go to school tomorrow, so I have to get excited again
2025년 6월 1일 오전 11:49
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Today, I finally got over my cold, so I’ve been spending all my time at home doing what I enjoy. I’ve been watching my favourite anime and playing games. But I have to go to school tomorrow, so I need to get excited again.
Why these changes were made: - Changed “doing what I like at home all the time” to “spending all my time at home doing what I enjoy” for smoother, more natural phrasing. // - Used present perfect “I’ve been watching” and “playing” to emphasise ongoing recent activities. // - Changed “have to get excited” to “need to get excited” for a softer, more natural expression of necessity. // - Used British spelling “favourite.”
2025년 6월 6일 오전 9:14
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