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Ahmad Seyar Mohabat
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"This is a deep question and relates to how we perceive the world. At times, we might feel like the main character in our own story, giving the impression that everyone around us is a supporting character because we experience life through our unique perspective. However, every person around us has a rich inner world filled with their own thoughts, feelings, fears, dreams, and struggles.
These feelings may not always be expressed clearly or beautifully, but their experiences are just as complex as ours. Some people have the ability to express these emotions in a compelling and beautiful way. That’s what makes connections strong; even though we all live separate stories, there is beauty in the shared experience of being human.
Indeed! This mystery is part of what makes human connections so deep and meaningful. The fact that each individual carries a vast inner world, sometimes visible, sometimes hidden, adds layers to our interactions. When someone shares a part of their inner world, it's like discovering pieces of a larger story. There’s beauty not only in what is expressed but also in what is left unsaid; this invites us to reflect and empathize."
Thank you.
2024년 9월 20일 오전 7:59
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Your meaning about inner world so pure and clean!)) We can only get this knowledge when we would communicate with each other without any hesitation. Thanks for letting us know about it! P.S. your English is incredible!
2024년 9월 20일
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