Can you tell me about any experimentos you have done before?
The most interesting experiment I took part was when I had to check the temperature from a great Island volcano. It wasn’t an easy task because you have to take risk if you want to take a good measure.
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Can you tell me about any experimentos you have done before? The most
interesting experiment I took part was when I had to check the temperature from
a great Island volcano. It wasn’t an easy task because you have to take risk if
you want to take a good measure.
Great write up.
Few observations though , ‘experiments’ was spelt wrongly.
-took part had an incomplete connection.
-punctuation not bad .
Overall , a good piece .
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